Hey - outside or inside?

What does everyone think?

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  1. I think if a tinok will read it - you may fix it

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  2. There's almost nothing inside. Perhaps a tinok bshaas hadchak. The rounded Beis's must be fixed.

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  3. This parsha is known throughout the world for the beis fail. Its otherwise passable but he does a shocking beis - round at the top and eikev that extends as long as the moishav

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  4. The Samech's and Mem Stuma's have quite a hefty Gag extending leftward ...

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